Drizzling winter night -
A memory of tears.
It smells nothing like rain.
with thanks to Pumpkin Doodle for the last line taken from the poem Hawthorne St.
http://pumpkindoodle.wordpress.com/2007/04/02/napowrimo-day-2/
About Me
- Gino Brignoli
- London, United Kingdom
- I am a recent Biodiversity and Conservation graduate from Birkbeck with an interest in entomology. I volunteer in the Lepidoptera department at the Natural History Museum.
3 comments:
very good use of the original line.
Nice one : but hey i challenge you to use one of these variations (if you wish) :
"The sun lying in the snow"
"Snow in the sun"
or
"The snow is the sun"
A very melancholy haiku. I like it. :)
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