Friday 13 April 2007

Haiku

Drizzling winter night -
A memory of tears.
It smells nothing like rain.

with thanks to Pumpkin Doodle for the last line taken from the poem Hawthorne St.
http://pumpkindoodle.wordpress.com/2007/04/02/napowrimo-day-2/

3 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

very good use of the original line.

Augustin Clair said...

Nice one : but hey i challenge you to use one of these variations (if you wish) :

"The sun lying in the snow"

"Snow in the sun"

or

"The snow is the sun"

Beaman said...

A very melancholy haiku. I like it. :)